Personal Statements for College Entrance

You all know that colleges look at high school GPAs and SAT scores to determine college entrance. Many schools also require an essay or personal statement. Some colleges require that you write on a particular topic such as: "Describe an incident which changed your life" or "State why you would like to attend this college and what you can offer to this college." Other colleges will leave it entirely up to you and only prescribe the length.

The following two essays are required by the UCs.
  • Respond to both prompts, using a maximum of 1,000 words total.
  • You may allocate the word count as you wish. If you choose to respond to one prompt at greater length, we suggest your shorter answer be no less than 250 words.
  • Stay within the word limit as closely as you can. A little over — 1,012 words, for example — is fine.

Prompt #1 (freshman applicants)

Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.

Prompt #2 (all applicants)

Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?

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See the following examples of requirements for Personal Statements:

Common Application (347 schools)
University of California (UC Pathways)
LMU
USC
Pomona College (Claremont Colleges Consortium)
University of Colorado at Boulder
University of Texas at Austin
University of Washington
University of Notre Dame

Univeristy of Oregon
University of Arizona

ASU


Assignment:

1. Choose a minimum of three colleges to which you are interested in applying. Either request their applications or begin the online application process (often involving setting up a user id and password). Due Oct. 1.

2. Find out if they require a personal statement. What are the instructions if they require a personal statement.

3. Write the require personal statement. Due second Friday of Oct.

See previously written personal essays as examples.
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